Reviews for Azure Sky |
---|
![]() ![]() What happened? I want to know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this took a lot of time and effort. The sentences flowed smoothly. Very exciting and suspenseful! Great characters! I hope Eliya is o.k. I guess we will have to see! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm slightly confused, but this was a great chapter. I hope Azure escapes. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gwah! Already! Moschef found Azure already? Man, you sure know how to write suspenseful stuff. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() That...was freaky. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Another great story to read! Actually, this has to be one of the best ones I've read so far. I love Azure, and how you describe his character. I can't wait to discover all his secrets! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! What? (I always knew the name "Katrina" was a bad omen... *growl-my sister-growl*) Btw, Jaime, it's spectacular...A brilliant story from a brilliant mind (or two)... cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! My fave part... 0-0 Minor issues with misspellings and such. Nothing to worry about, dear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, I thought I didn't recognize it. Get home soon. Learn color guard so you don't suck. And luff me forever. -Jazzy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! And dear Azure is such a clever - person... |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay azure! maybe when azure wakes up, you could describe more of the room... and maybe the girl's outfit or something when she comes in. keep up the amazing work! (now i have no more to read! ah! *pulls out hair* what happens?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() “He murdered…where did you hear that?” Eliya whispered, her tears stopping. “I…” Moschef hesitated. I'm pretty sure you meant Maxwell instead of Moschef. DON'T KILL AZURE! NO! otherwise, it is an amazingly good story. you should publish... i will buy the book. |
![]() ![]() ![]() no! azure! why are you doing this? why why why? *stops* *breathes* *pouts* well... you really have sucked me into this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's okay if this chappie isn't as exciting as the last ones, it just makes it more suspenseful. oh, by the way... "Some of his sunny blood hair was plastered to the side of his face..." little spelling thing there. maybe you should keep it that way... jk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, it's not quite a man-eating something, but a small army and a boy with hair strangely alike to azure's is pretty good... |