Reviews for The Fine Line Between Hate and Love
blackvespers chapter 20 . 4/20/2006
first of all this story seems flawless in grammatical stand point. and second of all its sad, romantic...yet the close to cliche thing. but its great. it almost made me cry. reminds me of update
citrus raindrops chapter 20 . 4/20/2006
good story so far ]
Ck90 chapter 20 . 4/20/2006
I'm sorry I did not review for the other chapter. I can tell why Devon thinks Hail is going to be trouble for their relationship. lol. Darcy and Hail are so similar they are not people person's and they only talk to people if they have to other than that they avoid everyone. Well let's see I like all of the characters but if I had to choose, wel dunn dunn dunn, I would choose Devon and Gale; Devon Gale; Devon Gale; Devon Gale; They are just so cute together that it's not even funny, They make me wish that I had a boyfrien, *goes to corner and pouts* but good job as always!
SimplySweetnSour chapter 20 . 4/20/2006
o0o. was that Gale looking, gasp, jealous? dun dun dun!this is great, keep it up. although it is ever so slightly your muse be kind to youSimplySweetnSour
SimplySweetnSour chapter 19 . 4/20/2006
aw. yay, everyone is finally finding someone. Gale and Devon, Kevin and Nina. love is blossoming.
Fades chapter 20 . 4/20/2006
Never say your story is chessy cause its not and never will be its addicting but you know that special chapter hm well i want to say gail but hail is intreguing but then ah im confused ...i want to dislike hail because it seems he will cause issues for gale and devon he like the better version of gale butt er i im at a stand still so special chapter i pick hail just to see whats in his head favorite charachter is gale though another virtual cooky for you it will be a cake next time :) I LOVE YOUR UPDATES
aznxdragonxluv chapter 20 . 4/20/2006
my favorite character is Gale, and then Hail so far...Darcy comes 4th after devon...Awesome chapter...a little cheesy but still good!
TricksterGoddess chapter 20 . 4/20/2006
Oh dear god... you're making me T-H-I-N-K? How aweful.. I can't think... I'm a BLONDE, lol, bad excuse I know... Umers.. well, it's to be expected that the main characters are most liked, so I tend to try and over look that... I mean I do like them and everything, and Hail and Darcy are SO incredibly alike, in my opinion that is, so I couldn't just pick either one of them, which is why I've decided to choose Mrs. Scharden because she's always so supportive and just seems to understand everyone and their needs. She's like the ideal mother, no offense to my mom, because although she's very rich, she doesn't act like a snob

And the bonus chapter.. well, I would like to read one between Kevin and Nina, that would be a cute chapter

I hope that for some reason, Gale ends up doing the part of Romeo, cause then, Devon as Juliet will probabally really get into acting it, just so that they can get to the kissing parts. And it will probably help her in confessing her love for him, because she will be, not exactly, although it could be considered practice until she REALLY tells him of her love. Please update soon and keep up the good work_!
FamousOneLiners chapter 20 . 4/20/2006
my favorite character has to be gale just because he has so many layers that only now are getting revealed. Also, the special chapter would be cool if it concerned hail or darcy, i would love to get to know them better.
J. Rea chapter 20 . 4/20/2006
Wow, that was really great. I'm sitting here in class and haven't started my work because I wanted to see if anything happend. And by chance you did update. It was really good. I can't wait to see what happens next. Has for the voting, my favorite character is Devon. Only because I kinda feel like her in a lot of ways (looks and flirting?) So I would pick her any day. Gales really cool to but I relate more to Devon. The special chapter? That's a hard one. I would like to know more about Darcy, but Kevin sounds like he would make an interesting character considering he sounds like everyone's dream guy. So I guess I pick him. Kevin that is. Wow that has to be the longest review I've ever made and it seems to be getting longer. Well I let you go, you probaly have better things to do. Great Job!
Wicked Sunshine chapter 17 . 4/20/2006
Gale's mom is a riot. I also can't wait to see what you do with Gale's "evil twin."
Puji chapter 19 . 4/20/2006
Ok first of all i'd like to make some things clear that have absolutely nothing to do with your story whatsoever:

1. Yes i am DDF's cousin2. And yes she is completely & utterly INSANE but she can write so please check out her story 'That's what i mean to say' if you havent already3. Whatever she wrote about me and ahem *said best friend* is not even true. She definitely knows how to exaggerate a little liking into a crush! Gr...4. I am NOT EVIL. Where does she get things like that from? *Smiles innocently*5. She is definitely a suck up - i admit calling her that when she was reviewing last!

Ok just a couple of things that i had to say! Wow that makes me fell so much better. Right so this chapter, Kevin and Nina! That would be well sweet! Darcy seems to be an interesting character. Hey, what if she likes Hail? That would be so kool! Lol dunno where that idea came from. I think its cause everyone's so HAPPY at the moment. No wait, i might have just jinxed it! Damn! Ok well does anyone know how to unjinx something that i just typed? Oh no, im starting to sound like DDF. I've lost the plot.

Im going to end this review now. And sorry if some parts make no sense - blame DDF (i do it whenever something wrong happens! LOL and that is true...hehe ask her yourself!) UPDATE SOON! PLEASE? PRETTY PLEASE?

FamousOneLiners chapter 19 . 4/19/2006
i absolutely, positively adore this story.
Rose Jameson chapter 19 . 4/19/2006
eeks! I LOVE IT! I wanna know a courtship dance... lol
Rose Jameson chapter 18 . 4/19/2006
I hated it cause it was soo sad, but then it turned happy so then I didnt hate it. I didnt hate it, It was like GOSH does this HAVE to happen, that kind of thing when authers put twists in the stories, but it is better now. I LOVE IT *YES* I get a cookie! I hope it is neither the liquid ones or the burnt, on of Gales? lol
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