Reviews for The Fine Line Between Hate and Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sheesh, Devon can be so stupid sometimes...I thought it was girls that were suppose to be in touch with themselves. Yet, half the time Devon doesn't know what to feel! Man, if Gale wasn't going after Devon I would think he was gay...but, hey! What am I saying, Devon is enough kick butt for the both of them. _ |
![]() ![]() no give me more, give me more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My God do you write MARVELOUS stories! Damn! Too cheesy there,hun! But it was okay! At least he's just having a soliloquy! Hee hee! How sweet of him to forever love Devon! Oh and please, would you tell me the almost complete physical apperance of Devon? Or if I've missed it, would you kindly tell me what chapter you have wrote it? Thank you! Hannah |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just started reading today and i am up to ch12 I love your storyPLEASE update soon ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes it was! omgomgomg gale really does have a heart! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh you know i just hate when stuff like that comes back to bite me in the butt you know :) lol once more, another great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your story! |
![]() ![]() Dude your story is so sweet. Like heartbreakingly sweet. Teary eyed sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() O_O I accidently lost my whole review! And I can't even remember what I actually put! XDD Damn scattered brain! Anyway! Loved this section, great to see things from Gale's point of view. Can't wait to see how Devan 'courts' him. XDD Oh that should be good... I'm so proud of myself today! I actually wrote a little bit... like... 3 paragraphs. XD But it's more then I've written in a long time... I didn't realize how much I'd missed it untill I was sitting there at work trying to pick the perfect word... XD *coughs* Anyway! Wuved the chapter, can't wait to see what will happen next! And Gale is so evil! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice nice! and me like! - keep up the great work won't ya? i can't wait to see how poor devon is gonna 'court' gale! update soon! |
![]() ![]() I have to say that coming on to the website and having the surprise that you updated made my bad day a lot brighter. Again you did a great job! I can't wait to see what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Deffinelty dramatic enough. And I don't think you over did the last line. How is Devon going to court him? Lol, this should get quite interesting... Update soon! ~dancingintheshadows |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! I loved this chapter! This story keeps getting better and better! I soo cant wait to see what happens even more now! U BETTER HURRY AND UPDATE! lol thank you for your writting, it pleases me hahah :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is an awsome story, i really like it. this was a great chapter, can't wait to read more so plz update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! The last line was so sweet! *wipes tear away* THe beggining i found it so funny how he is trying to frustrate DEvon. Anyway keep up the good work! |