Reviews for He Lies
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
Good repetition, not too overused.
karone-sakura chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
Aw! Well i loved this poem hon!
Faerie Energy chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
Beautiful... very true to life. I love it.

All due respect,Faerie Energy
youzi chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
terribly heartbreaking. honesty is really underrated! keep writing
Polkadots chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
It's good, but you could put more um...I'm not sure, but it dosn't quiet get it * from me.