Reviews for Electricity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() another one well done! i felt the impact too. very emphatic-the lady Elaine |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. I just reread your bio and noticed something: you're only fourteen? Really? You write much older. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "(breath, heartbeat, sensation!)" - I think that stinted the poems flow. it was just so pretty, really well written and utterly poetic. ~* noelle |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it, except for the fifth line- it seems too casual for the poem, not "poetic" enough. But even so, this is well worth the read. Great job. Prev' |
![]() ![]() ![]() O...it's so short of a read, but it doesn't seem that way. Ahh...short, sweet, 'n to the point. I like how you bolded and spaced the words; it adds to the effect. In general, it's a very lovely ickle poem, I could feel it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yays.. i love those moments.. lovely. |