This story is awsome, I do feel the tension between Ayame and Andou you mentioned, but I still like the caring protectiveness Hiro feels. I hope you develope more on him seeing he's your main character's love interest.

Appart from some minor grammar mistakes I think you've a brilliant product here and the artwork makes it even more remarkable. Congratulations. Please update as soon as posible.

I must say I like this story of yours. The style itself is quite pleasing, and I looked ahead at your character designs (very nice art by the way). I look forward to following your work as it develops. Great job thus far. Keep it coming.

Battle Royale? Like the novel, manga and movie? o_o Sorry, but wouldn't this count as fanfiction? You're using an idea from something already made; not the characters, but the idea. Just saying.

And if this story doesn't center around that, then I'm just confused as to where this whole thing is going.

I can't believe you have only one review! I love this story!

whoa... scary... Okay, anyone willing to send their child to "Battle Royale" deserves to be shot

But I'm curious now! Heehee, do you plan on continuing?