|Reviews for Edge of Nothingness|
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
The delicateness of the abstactions you present are astounding. It is hard to grasp concepts in abstraction and have them come across as intended. There is a vacantness to this, a kind of speck in the void feeling, but it is a well planned kind of loneliness. Great work.
| Dying Rose chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
BEAUTIFUL. Astounding. I feel priviledged that you took the time to review my work. This poem is exquisite. I love it. You're going on my fav authors and this is going on my fav stories list.
| darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
wow... i really like this. the short stanzas in between the long ones really added to the poem. and i can relate to this too well... nice job. me likes it.!
| deletemyaccount2012 chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
sad, but beautifully written.
| Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
The forlorn wanderings made
Upon a road never trodden.
The path ahead seems to fade
Sad, but beautifully written.
I'm not much into the holidays, either.
| Wing Chant chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
It sounds quite...empty...filling the reader with a giant hole of nothingness in the human heart. Like the voice of the poem expresses a sort of lonliness quite full of gripping emotion. Quite EMO! (eMO for emotional lol) haha.
| Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
Human loneliness...you've definitely captured this in your poem...I like 'wandering the edge of nothing', I've often had that feeling, but the good thing is that these things always pass.
| classic violet chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Wow, it's really, really deep. Incredibley deep and amazinly wonderful. Awesome job!
| Colonel Augen chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
*gasps* ever been in outter space? (not that I have..) but it seems it would feel like your poem makes me feel.. Floating, empty, a little upside-down, this sort of desperate calmness..
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
I like this poem a lot.. i think weve all felt that way at some point.. great job
| Aruchu-chan chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
I really like this. The imagery clearly reflects the sad feelings. I've written something along the same topic for one of my stories. Keep writing. I hope things get better for you. _
| T. Rowland chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
this poem is so ripe with emotion, beauty within sadness, simple langauge with a extraordinary powerful image. lovely.
| Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Wow, I really love this. I love the way this is written. Especcially like the lines 'No hopes for the future, no heart for the past'. I love this poem! Thanx for the review.
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
This is so heartwrenchingly beautiful. I loved it and I can definetly relate. Excellent writing! QueenVixta
| CarpeDiem28 chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Beautiful, yet sad poem. Your emptiness is portrayed pretty critically in your work, nonetheless, it is still excellent. Thanx for the reviews, i appreciate each and every one of them.
Keep up the great work. Hope to see more work soon.