Reviews for the irony
La Terraza chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Wow, see, I think this is the best one of your I've read thus far. I really like the tone you express in your writing, it's very...uniuqe.
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
a curly haired girl in ribbons...that reminds me of victorian fashion...and that line "it's not too late to be beautiful"...really inspiring...very good job...oh and pls, review some of my poems if you have the time...

truly yours...
crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
"with roses cut into her eyes"

beautiful imagery.

"and oh,/


don't you love the irony?/"

Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Very nice, and I find myself wanting more. Brava.
moscowsnow chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
I love how it sort of... starts off normal, and then degenerates into wildness. It's beautiful.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
"with roses cut into her eyes" that was one of my favorite lines. this was so pretty&pure awesome. : )
A.D Williams chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Great piece !
LaMSaErArNier chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
This is incredible...The format was perfect, and the concept was beautifully captured and expressed...It's excellent.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
shiver inducing, creepy and the way you write it makes this so sexy. loved it, from the begining to bitter ending. love it.

~* noelle
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
wow... it creeps me out to think aobut it... you did a great job~

keep writing!
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
the format in this is confused, but i think you just about manage to pull it off.