|Reviews for White Dust Monster|
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
This is very in your face. I would say it flows, but it more runs at you rapidly, unbelievable tempo, I guess would be the word.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
Even without the formatting, the words themselves catch you, flitflitflit and then send you crashing back down. Lifted, dropped, pulled through this addiction. Good.
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
Well even if it isn't formatted the way you want I still like it. The short lines add something, but don't ask me what.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
im goin to have a look at ur website for the original way you wrote it - but it looks good already ) great work, keep it up.