Reviews for The Beginning of the Fall
Rozlin chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
more up beat but still rather... depressed. i really need to go read your blogs, don't i?
Phantoms-fallen-angel chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Hey, that was awesome. Your desciptive language is so easy to understand and relate to - it's not written using any metaphors, but this aids the reader in understanding and interpreting your message correctly. I particularly liked the part when you said: "It takes so much strength for me to take every breath

When I know that every breath of life is leading me to death"

I found this very truthful and touching - an interesting perspective you up the *great* work, and cheers! - Angel
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
I love it, but it'd be nice if I could see you happy again.
shiva the destroyess chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
bravo...i like this one rhymes and very to be us...lool..
undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Not as good as the others, but still amazing...

-freak from the corner
Plinky chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
As always, b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.l.y portrayed emotions, so lyrically written.

I love the second verse the best. No, the chorus. Ooh, I don't know.

Such beautiful emotion, and so well expressed, it's like you painted the words. (I don't know if that makes sense. Oh well.)

Beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful. Beautiful.

Keep writing! ;-D