Reviews for One Wing
Miss-Nina chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Aiiya! Another pretty one, Chobi. (Another sad one too). I still luv your poetry and everything. I don't know how your make it rhyme so good! Is amazing, very much so. So, how about another poem? I lurv them so much.


And tankoo so much for reviewing my story to the last chapters (wll, almost not yet!) _

Wing Chant chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
I got a tune going on this song...yeah, that's right...a tune. You are special enough to have some random reviewer create a tune to your song. So, give yourself a pat on the back. _ I love the chorus! "Somehow, someday you'll understandWhy you were born with one wing!"

Ladeedah! _ *hum* Hehe. Great song, great lyrics! Your emotions are cleverly conveyed in this lyrical masterpiece. D Kudos to you!


loserz. ;)
chubrock chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
i catchy eventhough i cant sing as you know but it is good gooda i heart it