|Reviews for Mess|
| Dove chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Wow...I told you about the one time my grandma was high in the hospital because they gave her too many drugs and she saw cockroaches on the ceiling, didn't I? They apparently were eating a plate of crackers...
That line just reminded me of that.
I would have to agree with everyone, though, the imagery in this is quite amazing. Is this about a drug trip? I'm trying to think of what it could mean, but that's about the only thing I can come up with. Of what it must be like to be a coke addict. Once again, though, I may be way off.
| Bita-chan chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
You really are very good poet, and this poem displays that wonderfully. *claps for your imagery* (I'm adding you to my favourite authors list)
| HHHHHHH chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
Maybe it is cause I am drunk, butn the this imagery almost killed me with its intensity. Which is why I must say I love it.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
powerful, i love the rhyme. great work
| CyanideKiss chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
Such a neat poem, and the imagery was well work.
| ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
An interesting approach, but very well done! I hope to see more from you soon.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
POwerful detail and discriptions; this really came alive for me. Keep up the good work.