Reviews for You
a work in progress chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
sry too lazy to actually sign in

love the poem i so know the feeling of waiting... and how it feels when the waiting is over... great poem
CRaZy-OdIN chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
very sweet, some very nice imagery, and gives a picture of unsettling happiness, and need for things to remain the same even if its slipping out of your hands and control. I really like it keep it up. x
ShadesofBlue69 chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
so very sweet, and nicely done. it a has a good flow and rhythm to it. (and we all wish are relationships were just like that)
Arichos chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
Are you in love? you sound like it. Awesome poem mez, you've done well to give feeling to this poem.
queenvixta chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
Such a beautiful and touching piece. I love the rhyming, it really adds to the poem. I'm glad you decided to post it again! QueenVixta
Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
could all of the endings possibly been this happy?a reality, i suppose.

but i think we dont really appreciate what we have anyway to appreciate the happiness we sometimes get.

its again, i am more of an abstract fan.
Wing Chant chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
A true description of love, m'dear. You did an excellent job conveying the longing and affection for this person in your poem. Very elaborate! _

loserz. ;)