where are you ? Have you really become invisible? -frowns- please come back. Your writing is really good. This mystery of the girl with the converse is really good. Been waiting for years for you to update. Please come backkkk

This is so amazing. I love the intrigue and Clever's personality. She's such a dynamic character, you just know SOMETHING's gonna happen.

Bravery is such a sweetheart and just adorable sounding. Love love love his personality style too.

Update soon?! (even though you haven't in a few years frownface)

Awesome. I like the dryer thing, its kinda weird

It's a really quirky story, and I'm hooked. A new idea, a creative plot. I love it.

Who in the world is this Laundromat Queen?

Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold and finally reveal the Laundromat Queen's identity!

This was one of the first stories I've ever read on fictionpress, and I instantly fell in love with it (:

It's been so long since you've written, I'm not sure if you've lost interest in fictionpress, writing, or this story, but I love it (emphasis on the "I")and I can't believe I will never know the end of this story :( hopefully you find this review soon, and it gives you motivation to finish the story give satisfaction to 74 reader's minds.

Thanks. :)

Yeesh, I've taken an instant loving to your story . Hope to read the next chapter soon:)

zomfg.

you REALLY gotta update soon.

this is really good :D

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i was getting so into it! and then...nothing. update soon? i really like this. it's quirky and weird and wonderful and i love it.

This is so great! Please keep at it :D

I'm really enjoying this story. It's so interesting and mysterious you've got me completely hooked. Clever and Bravery are fantastic characters, and I'm sure I'm as curious as anyone to find out just who she is.

I was wondering how long you were planning on making the story? I could quite happily continue reading no matter how long it got.

I really hope you update soon. )

Ah! I'm dying to know who the Laundromat Queen is. Please update as soon as you can.

I LOVE YOUR STORY!

When do you think you'll add the next chapter?

:D

This story is the cement to my converse. It's very enticing. I love the overall mystery surrounding the Laundromat Queen and can't wait for her identity to be revealed! Please update.

Whoa, I was certain this story was doomed to be unfinished forever. I'm glad another chapter is up though; I hate un-finished endings.

It's good to see this getting updated. Hopefully the next installment will be faster in coming along...

Spawny