Reviews for Legend of the Laundromat Queen
Le Meg chapter 4 . 9/8/2007
I love the idea of Clever - it reminds me a lot, actually, of "Stargirl" by Jerry Spinelli. I don't know if you're familiar with it, but it's quirky and adorable and it really makes you feel like doing odd things. Emery is a little intense for me. I understand why she's angry and I totally relate to that, but at the same time, if you aren't going to be up front about how you feel you can't expect other people to just automatically get it. Of course, it's not always easy to be honest about that either, which I suppose is something everybody can relate to, heh. Anyway, good stuff. ;]
Vrotz chapter 4 . 7/13/2007
I love your originality, but I must tell you...either the girl is really short and petite, or the dryer she sits in must be very big becasue I tried to get in my dryer, and, let's just say it ended in a pitiful and extremely uncomfortable attempt per se.

Poor Clever...I can only imagine what the dryer does to her spine since I didn't stay in there long enough for the posisiton to have permanent effects on me...

Post soon!
critiqua chapter 4 . 6/17/2007
oh my goodness. i have been waiting for ages for this chapter to come up.

you don't disappoint.

I really like the Emery/Nyx action (or inaction, lol depending), but i think that having Bravery tell Emery that Nyx was crazy for her was kind of ehh...idk. i think it kind of ruined the whole denial thing they had going.

all in all, however, it was good.

brief side note: Lily's character is kind of OOC; i would expect her to be far more confident than how she was around Bravery and his friends.

other than that, UPDATE.
Eeri chapter 4 . 5/30/2007
yay! i'm glad i caught this after the recent update. clever is so cool with her socks and converse. i'm glad bravery is getting more and more curious. i'm looking forward to your updates! it's definitely a unique and original storyline :)
Midnight Owl chapter 4 . 5/28/2007
oh goodness. i'm so glad you finally updated even though it gave little insight into who clever is... but i'm patient ;-)

and this chapter was by no means sloppy- i liked emery's reaction to lily. the defensiveness was raw, and that seemed really in character. the defensive mechanism seems to go well with emery, so it'll be good to see where that goes.

and bravery. oh, bravery, what a lot to live up to with a name like that! i wish i knew a little more about lily's character so i wasn't so apt to just toss her away. looking forward to reading more!
Pretty Girls Make Graves chapter 4 . 5/28/2007
I just think this idea is so incredibly unique. I kind of wish I could be like Clever.

Such an excellent name, too.

Anyway, I'm ecstatic about the update. Can't wait for the next one.
invizygirl chapter 4 . 5/28/2007
huzzah! a new chapter! i am so proud! *grins* decent update. poor nyx. longer update please.
Miz Em chapter 4 . 5/28/2007
Whee this was a great chapter, I thought! I just love Clever to bits! I know we probably won't get to see anything from her perspective but I can't help but think'd it'd be interesting! Poor Lily, I can't wait to see what will happen at the show. _
SpawnMeister666 chapter 4 . 5/28/2007
This is becoming a very curious little tale. I am, as always, intrigued as to where its heading...

Her Wishing Well chapter 3 . 4/18/2007
I loved this especially Nyx and Emery and Bravery and Clever. This is really unique and funny. I hope you continue.
Simple Thoughts chapter 3 . 3/15/2007
Good story. And I absolutly love Relient K. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Midnight Owl chapter 3 . 1/17/2007
OH MAN! I wish it hadn't been so long since you've updated this- it's perhaps the most clever (ha) thing I've read on this site ever. Really. I'm fascinated. I love Clever, I love Bravery (I love his NAME, though I'm sure you get that a lot) and I like how easily you mix the characters together. I like Nyx and Emery- they're so important to the story but they're not... the main characters. So many authors just gloss over friendships but they're what make relationships- anyways. I think Bravery's starting to get curious about Clever and, well, that's only natural. There are very few people interesting enough to decide to give advice from a dryer. Lovely, fantastic, brilliant work. Please, please, please update this!
invizygirl chapter 3 . 1/16/2007
omg i luv this plot line. its really unqiue. great writing. cant wait to read more.
flyinghome chapter 3 . 12/22/2006
I love this! Update soon...please?
Minchi chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
Lol. I love this. Its so weird, but funny.

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