Reviews for Legend of the Laundromat Queen
Typesour chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
This is a fun, quirky plot you've got here. I love the idea, it makes me think of fun songs that you love to blast in your car. I could totally see myself blasting this story in my car - if that makes any sense. The characters are colorful too with names that are pretty out there, but you don't make it too much of a stretch. For some reason, the names wedge themselves perfectly into the scenes you lay out. Oh and Bravery is one cool tomato, an individual too and I like that. Anyways, this is intriguing an I hope you continue!
miss-blackhair chapter 2 . 11/29/2006
hahah, i LOVE the idea behind this. keep it up! :)
wewe chapter 3 . 11/28/2006
arent you going to update anytime soon? please please update soon...
Flying With Fish chapter 1 . 11/24/2006
Wwow, this is really good! I'm totally in love, and I can't wait for more! It's very original, which is fun, and I must admit, I'm already completely in love with Clever and Bravery.
toxic-noodle725 chapter 3 . 11/18/2006
i really like the plot of this story. especially the character of the laundromat queen. its a creative and original plot that im starting to love. so u must update and get this story in the road!
Sari la elfa chapter 3 . 11/14/2006
Hey! this is a neat story! when do you update? soon? keep it up! question: is she really a pixy? hahahaha lol
Pretty Girls Make Graves chapter 3 . 11/11/2006
I'm back!

And I missed this story so much. It's good to see that it's also back.

Bravery sounds wonderful. I can't wait until we find out more about Clever.
omaterluna chapter 3 . 10/26/2006

that was really touching...

and so much going on

i LOVE it LOL xD

update soon
Right or Ryn chapter 3 . 10/25/2006
I'm so lucky, you updated in like what, two days? This is great! If you can just make a habit of updating that frequently I'll be one happy girl.

From the beginning I never even really considered Bravery and Lily ever getting together. I picture Lily as someone who'd be nice to everyone and could be friends with everyone but still has a certain type of guy that she likes to date. (to me Brave isn't her type). Who knows she is nice, maybe she might have given him a chance if it wasn't for that little detail that she's already got a boyfriend. She also doesn't seem like the type who would cheat. Plus, I've already pictured Bravery and Clever together.

Did Clever ever have any rules about not following her or something? I can see Bravery getting really curious and then going on a stake-out outside of the laundromat looking for girls in converses and funky socks either before or after his appointment. It would be cool if we find out at the end of the story (or whenever) that Clever's actually a character thats been introduced already and has a different personality at school (or wherever) then the one she shows at the laundromat. Maybe she can be the "shy" and "quiet" observer at school and then be free of her disguise once she leaves.

I liked how you mentioned the comfort factor of the dryer, I wonder what type of pillow she uses. lol.

Nyx and Emery really need help. I think that Bravery should suggest that Em should go to Clever and get some desperately needed help. What she said was uncalled for and way too harsh, bringing his homelife into it and everything, even if he is a no good player. I like his personality a lot and can't understand that if he likes Em so much then why does he constantly hook up with these random girls? Even if it might not mean anything to him that is definitely not a way to a girl's heart. I do hope that Nyx isn't completely crushed though I don't have much hope for him being otherwise.

Em should wear the mood ring all the time now.

Can't wait for another chapter! Did you have some other chapters posted but took them down to edit them or are you coming up with completely new chapters? You said it seemed like a rough draft but if thats the case its a really really good rough draft. I only saw a couple mistakes like where you said "cheast" instead of chest or "Her stared at her blankly" instead of He stared at her blankly.

Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to another new and exciting chapter.
sammy chapter 3 . 10/25/2006
your story is so amazing. i love it love it love it. UPDATE SOON PLEASE... haha and because i sat hear reading it and have no will power whatsoever I'm gonna fail my spanish test tomorrow.. THE MYSTERIOUSNESS OF THIS LAUNDRY MATT GIRL IS KILLIN ME.
omaterluna chapter 2 . 10/25/2006
I LOVE it! lol xD
Forget-The-Sorrow chapter 3 . 10/25/2006
I like it! Please update soon!
Bob n Kazzi chapter 3 . 10/25/2006
SpawnMeister666 chapter 3 . 10/25/2006
This is interesting. Rambles on a bit, and parts of it sem disjointed, but I want to see where you're going with it.

The FiboNACHI Sequence chapter 3 . 10/25/2006
I like this story a hell of a lot. It's got the right feel for the characters you are dealing with and the character of "clever" is intruiging.
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