|Reviews for Slanted Rain|
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
The rhymes were sort of...cute. I didn't know why I said that but they just were. The imagery was very nice indeed.
| Hate In The Form Of Passion chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
I like how you can write a poem that would take me 200 words in just a couple of lines. Something that I will never be able to accomplish. You have my praise. And thanks for the review!
| Tr APeze-sWiNGer chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
i'm such a sucker for this type of rhyme scheme. i picture a boy and a girl holding hands, walking near a beach. i really like it, but i feel like the first two lines sort of went past me because of how the rest fit together in the ryhme scheme.
| Raspberry Twirl chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
wow. that was beautiful! you were able to tell such a long story in eight lines, and still take "photographs" along the way!
| Decollage chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
The rhyme scheme is simplistic-amazing, as is the sort of jaunty power with the scant words and so much feeling.
It always astounds me how so few words, manipulated correctly, can mean and feel so much.
| di chan forever chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
i like the symbolism here, it's simple, but like most poetry, less is more. well done.
| kitkat41 chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Wow, that was interesting. Thanks for your earlier review! I like your poetry. It's very meaningful and deep, and while I don't always understand it, I still like it a lot!
| Gilee7 chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
I just came from reading the poem before this one, the EPIC one that's like 600 or more words, and here we have this one, that's not even 30 I don't think. Quite a change.
I really like this one, too, of course. Nice rhythm and nice imagery and nice ... feeling. I love every line. This is truly a beautiful poem.
| BlackDreamLily chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Heehee! Cutesy! Me likie.
| fsk chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
| Jurion chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
I liked this one very much. Although I tend to write in every style of poetry, I'm partial to more abstract poems; they let my mind take from it what I can apply to my own life, so in a sense they have infinitely more potential than longer, more descriptive poems. I like how you use parenthesis. I'll have to try that technique... as well as maybe read some published poetry. I normally never read poetry.
I'm interesting enough now to read some more! Oh, and thanks for the review. I love opening my email to see that I've gotten one.
| angie3838 chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Interesting rhyme scheme.
What kind of "locks" are you talking about in the third line though? Locks as in key and lock, or locks of hair?
I like the image the poem finally comes to, "humble/on opposite sides of the dock" is a very powerful image.
| sTrive chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Are you truly faithless? _Either way you roll, you're a lovely writer and your poetry speaks. You might like my poem, Rainy Bliss. It's kinda' like yours, 'cept it's a haiku and probably not as well done. _
| account not in use chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
love the rhyming. and adore the picture it presents.
| like a lover chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
"baby lets go for a walk;/all we have to do is talk/stay like rocks,/humble/on opposite sides of the dock."
I adore those lines; I could read them over and over again.