Reviews for Slanted Rain
naughtgreen chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Opposite sides of the dock, like those junior high dances where the boys are on one side and the girls on the other, or it used to be like that. Now everybody is grinding all over the place and getting as horny as hell. Even so young.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
The title is really eye-catching...and the poem is good too. Creative as usual. Nice work!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
rhyme rhyme, muchly nice little poem here, i like
T. Rowland chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
the title is lovely... you are very talented. agreed with the previous review, the contrast is very interesting. powerful and beautiful.
Relayer chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
The last line creates a real sense of distance although the rest of the poem is quite intimate... it's an interesting contrast, which I am yet to grasp completely.
classic violet chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Amazing job. I love the title. It's so vivid and... real.
lighting candles chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
beautifully done. like the writer before this, i think it's something everyone can relate to; your use of the abstract&metaphors are also done well.
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
I can picture the whole thing. I think we've all been there at one time or another, even if we don't like to think about it or admit it.

Beautifully captured and atmospheric writing.

WELL DONE

KEEP WRITING!

F.C
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