Reviews for For November
Written chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
gorgeous poem. whenever I rhyme, I sound like Dr. Seuss. You have such elegance!
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
This is so beautiful. I think that it's wonderful!
ice flyer chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Beautiful beautiful poem. The images are gorgeous and the way you speak to and personify November is just so skilled. I love it.
gracefully-tripping chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Wow, this was really, really, good. Awesome.

SnoDragon chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
Absolutely brilliant as the driven snow. I love the repetition of endearments at the ends of each stanza, makes for lovely rhythm and rhyme. Well done!
Dawn's-End chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
This is my favorite of all your poems. I haven't found anyone on fictionpress who gets their poetry to flow this well or who uses the english language so expertly.

The first line is captivating and each stanza has a purpose. The quatrain from line 13-16 is particularly potent. However, every line is equally powerful.

Even if you'd written nothing else, I'd put you on my favorites list just for this poem.
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
Wow, I love the concept of the last line. Your rythem is beautiful...I'm putting this on my favorites, good job!