Reviews for Whispers
Montrasaur chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Stuff like this is worthy of the anthology I'm writing. Interested, then check my profile for more details.
SoonToBeMe chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
I love how many ways I can imagine what this poem is really talking about (more specifically than finding peace). Works that talk about things such as finding peace and escaping pain really apply to everyone and that's what makes this poem great. That and the beautiful imagery and word choice. "Home sweet- So bitter sweet home". You knew that was an awesome line as soon as you typed it didn't you? It's a great feeling. This is one of my favorite poems on fiction press. Great job! Also, thanks for your review of my poem Lethal Injection.
star-wars-rocks chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
i like the imagry that's created, about the road to peace.
Changethesubject chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
its beautiful, well written, well expressed. lovely work.
Silence the Storm chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Beautiful. Great work.
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
Simply beautiful. The string of words intertwined with heartfelt emotion is daring, yet, soft. Good job.

I.K.Seraphina chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
This is really good, it has a lot of feeling in it.
Lonely Forest chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
"Home sweet-So bitter sweet home"

Love this line. Good job.

And thanks for your review of my sotry :"After Dark"
alivewithlove13 chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
This poem is beautiful good job!
inkfish chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
man i love it!

im a grammer freak: "I will ripe it out" take the "e" off of rip. it sounds like you want to ripen your heart.

great job! the ending is perfect
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Heartfelt and honest; I loved the mood that you created in this. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.