|Reviews for anchoring velocities|
| master's apprentice chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
WOW, this poem is amazing. I love your images, you can feel the intensity in the words. I loved the lines "freshcut stems and first kisses" and "do anything even turn traitor". You create the intense longing of the heart very well, very passionate, not flimsy. The emotion is so strong it is almost tangible. The end line is great, it continues underlying sad tone but adds hope to it.
| Fate Thirteen chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
Oh, simply gorgeous! So breathless and urgent, all-consuming and dangerous.
| BlackDreamLily chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
What a poetic, charming piece! I'm off to read more!