Reviews for this is called a faux pas
i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
it's kind of funny, the way saying easy is like swallowing cold coffee and glass, .real. and one week later, your staring at a couple of red lines on your wrist asking him how.

three cheers to teenage love and not knowing why it hurts like hell.
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
your apology is awkward

and i smear my lipstick swallowing it. after,

you say my smile looks like bleeding.

oh christ. that was just cataclysmic.
do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
"after, you say my smile looks like bleeding." this is beautiful. i love.
The Watched chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Lovely. Just...true. And therefore perfect in its imperfection.
citrus scented chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
wow wow jesus wow. loved it, the first stanza espeacilly. the descriptions- so unqiue but perfect at capturing just what you need. wonderful clever piece of writing.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
I can so relate to this right now.

Favorites list.
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Wow. This is amazing. There's this story line running through it. Bravo. The imagery and the words you used were excellent.
addie pray chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
This is a perfect rendition of the I love you, I don't, I love you again merry?-go-round.
lackluster chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
funny how we do the things we'd swear we'd never do.

"let it be, baby,"
Hell's first Icicle chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
a little confusing, but the emotion is there, tho i dun relli get the last line? meh. im a sucker for ur poems. i love them. i just hate reviewing!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
something about this poem seems so very human and basic and loveable, intriuging even in how simple it really does seem, muchly sweet poem