|Reviews for Lovers and Friends|
| Spiral Artist chapter 2 . 11/21/2005
I can feel intense confusion and a squall inside, rising, rising, uncontrolled, but still, both welcomed and unwelcomed. It is truly a time of confusion, I could guess (since you never reply to my mails...), and these poems represent that... no, scratch it, REFLECT that.
| not sure yet chapter 2 . 11/21/2005
this one came off as slightly stalkerish to me, i dont know, muchly love the image of of what she's wearing though, seems to say a lot about the personality of the character, again in the same set as the last one where the narrator creeped into the scene as well, muchly sweet poem here, good job
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
feels very possessive, i like the point of view of this one, presents whole image in of itself of the narrator in the scene as well as the images presented, good flow as well, i like, well done