I got all the way through to chapter five before i admitted defeat and stopped, because there's only so much a person can take before their garbage detector kicks in and saves them from wasting more time. This story is just soooooo bad. The characters are dumb and stereotypical. The story is unremarkable and so utterly absurd that a person has to switch their brain off to keep reding.
Utter crap.

I read the story... and right before Christmas too...it took me a day to read...

I don't know what to say really. When Iz died, (she was my favorite character) I had a feeling Alex would get revenge. But I kind of didn't mind if Alex committed suicide.

Damn, I'm messed up.

cool story

Read the whole thing. Intense.

Why the fuck didn't you let her die in piece. She wasted semoth life. On another note, great story.

I LOVED it! Alex is such a special character and I grew very fond of her :)
Amazing story :)

Awesome story!

This is my third time reading your story and I have to say that it's my most favorite story in all of ff and fp. I hope that someday, you'll come back and continue with this amazing series!

I really like how you've integrated a few twists here and there, whilst building up the characters.

Something to look out for, if you ever do go back and edit it, is your incorrect use of "your" and spelling of "thru".

Second time reading your story. Just wanted to say I really really love it. :)

really good story. im looking forward to reading part two ;]

Love love love this story! This is definitely one of my top favorite stories of all of ff and fp. :)

Wow, Jack has his limits. I thought it was sweet though that he called a truce. Now, for Alex's world to fall apart...

Cheers

~~sharky

Well...I am just going to skip to the next chapter.

Cheers

~~sharky

Character development anyone? Well, that is pretty much all you can say for this chapter. Amazing depth you have for Alex.

CHeers

~~sharky