Reviews for Chemistry Cacophony
HarderToBreathe chapter 7 . 5/6/2012
Please please please update this story. I love it so much. It's so spunky and brings back good memories. :)
t-o-n-e-d-e-a-f chapter 7 . 3/8/2011
I love this story so much, but Mae makes me really disappointed. Maybe it's apart of her character development, but GOD. I want to slap that bitch so hard.

She comes off as weak - she falls easily for a pretty face and is manipulated by it - and slow (not aware that she's being manipulated and not noticing the boy that's actually worth it).

Hopefully, things will change for her and she grows some brass balls and realizes that Asshole Owen is not the one. If not, I'm taking Logan for myself. :)
WithoutException chapter 6 . 1/5/2009
Hey! I really like this story. At first, it seems like Mae is a little shallow (and malleable, since she sort of lets Owen define their relationship and pressure her into sex and drugs), but I can see that she's developing more as a person.

Plus, I love Logan. He's awesome. Poor guy, though. And are we going to get more info on why he's best friends with Owen, when they're so different?

This is great! Please keep this story going!

:) WithoutException
sheddinglight chapter 7 . 9/23/2008
Updates would be nice.

I am DYING to know... what will happen.

And for the first time reading this today, I've been supporting Logan through it all.

Owen is just... a crackhead.


Anyway now for the critique. :D

You are a good writer.

No doubt about that.

You have an interesting plotline and characters seem realistic.

Just... it seems like this story was sort of rushed, but I understand you started it way back in 05 or something...

Update :D

or at least tell me the ending


just kidding

-Crimsom Tears
A Star In Her Eye chapter 7 . 9/12/2008
I LOVE LOGAN...he's a sweetie
slowdear chapter 7 . 8/11/2008
Wow. The kiss was totally unexpected. I'm really glad it happened though. I'm really hoping that the kiss will open Mae's eyes but I have a feeling it wouldn't. She'll probably end up in a deeper relationship with Owen. Mae really needs to realize how she acts when she's with Owen.

I feel terrible for Logan. He really likes her but he can't do anything about it. He's too good and I don't think he would do more to betray his best friend.

Anyway, a really unexpected ending for this chapter. I really like that. I hope you update soon.
WithoutException chapter 7 . 8/10/2008
This is getting really good! Poor Logan...
Erin Maureen chapter 7 . 7/9/2008
Em Wolf chapter 7 . 7/9/2008
Whoa. That totally did not end how I expected it to. Kudos for you for taking a seemingly cliche plotline and weaving it into something denser, more realistic. I wonder how this will pan out. Keep up the good work.
perdita chapter 7 . 7/9/2008
oh no. what a shitty situation
gulistala chapter 6 . 12/8/2007
Oh dear. Mae certainly has changed a lot from dating someone she was supposed to break up with but instead getting even deeper into the relationship. That guy does not work for her. And oh, do I sense that little Logan and has a thing for little Mae? Aw.

Mae is so stupid for not standing up for herself. She could but she won't because she's too smitten to see Owen for who he really is, right?

I really do wonder how this is going to turn out so can't wait till the next chapter!

duckliy543 chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
googd job

keep up great work. !
Leaving Fictionpress chapter 6 . 10/1/2007
This story has changed quite a lot in tone since the last time I read it, which makes sense, given that that was over a year ago. I'm still deciding whether I like it better or not. Mae doesn't seem to have very much self-respect, though, which is somewhat sad.
slowdear chapter 6 . 9/15/2007
I am really captivated by Mae. I really like her and I like how she's not really doing anything to make things better for herself. (Very realistic.) It shows that she will learn from her mistakes. I'm glad she realized that she isn't in love with Owen because he's not worth it. But I do think he is amazing in getting Mae to sleep with him right after she confronted him about the other girl. Obviously he can get whatever he wants.

I think the main reason Owen asked Mae out is because he knew that Logan liked her. He seems like the type of person that needs to prove that he can do it even if it's proving it to his best friend. And I feel terrible for Logan because he can do so much better than Owen but he can't even though he knows Mae's true feeling for Owen.

I really enjoyed reading all six chapters in early, early morning, which also prevented me from sleep because I can't stop thinking about it and had to get up to write this review. I really can't wait for the next chapter and see how Logan's party will unfold.

By the way, I'm a huge Dylan fan. In a way I do and don't believe that Dylan did write about Edie Sedgwick. I like to believe so because Edie was very pretty and Dylan was quite the star, and it just kind of worked. I know the reason is stupid but I really like female celebs with tragic endings.

Thank you for writing.
BeingMyself chapter 2 . 9/14/2007
I liked how for once the parties aren't held at the popular people's houses. I don't think I'd ever hold a huge party at my house. Thinking about people in the bedrooms, throwing up in the toilets, and trashing stuff is just not my idea of a good time... when it's my stuff. Lol.
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