|Reviews for Love Or Loyalty?|
| Aquafied chapter 5 . 11/22/2005
i just keep thinking odd little things like, isnt it Jesus H. Christ and isnt the sun a star...
but yeah, it was good, quick though.
seems like this is going to be a really good story.
| Aquafied chapter 4 . 11/22/2005
hm, i supposed she can still get away now, cant she?
everything seems so small and slow, i love it.
i wish they're were more stories that could move at this pace, much more realisitic
| Aquafied chapter 3 . 11/22/2005
good, emotion seems to be really stirring intruiging
| Aquafied chapter 2 . 11/22/2005
nice suffering reminds me of a story i once co-wrote, but it a much softer way..without the starving.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
interesting, it is a cliche idea but hey, its well done, very well done.
though i am not sure they would have had them jump straight out, but the panic is well stated.