Reviews for Lay there with him!
silently watching chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
i love this so much! i am glad you have found something so beautiful and real...this is one of my faves by you, really grest. i can tell it is genuine.
t-t-t-ouch chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
Thanks for the review. This poem really allows the reader to almost feel the happiness.

Good job.
Matelot001 chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Im glad you have found happiness, isnt love a beautiful thing when you find it...
Annotations Of Stacey chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
aww!there is a nice place inside u laura!
dragonelemental chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
hm, who could that be? lol nah, great poem, again, i can tell ur happy out there :)
Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
egh. i must say kudos to you for posting a poem about happy not usually directly do people post of such happy ends with out a hint of sarcasm.

its kind of harlotly .
Ether Boy chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
aww this is a great poem. i loved the line 'feeling his emotions through his lips'. extrmely cool. great to see you're still updating as well.
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
Nice scene. One time you used past tense while the rest of hte poem is in present, so fix the grammer a bit, but overall, nice.