Reviews for The Dominant and the Submissive
JT0000 chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Ugh. I'm in love with it.
Samana chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
well written, a bit odd, but well written
zakei chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
ow. but kinda true.. if youre like crazy in love. otherwise, nup.
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
The pain and anger tht one with lust has. I don't dare call it love becuase those who love, do not hurt their loved ones. They simply can't not when they are really in love.


the Stranger in the moonlight.
emerald chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
whoa...that's very visual...nice all the implications and everything it could have.
NamesBondRaeBond chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
O! This one is morbidly beautiful. Is it supposed to represent an abusive relationship or just show how some people rely on others so much that they soon only exsist with that one person with them?

Anyway. If you made these into lyrics, you would be an amazing songwriter. If you play an instrument you could start a band then start a career.

This poem makes me want to sing "Absolutley(Story of a Girl)". ~This is the story of a girl...~
Rovandin chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Great imagery, sounds like Nine inch Nails lyrics
PearlinTheMist chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
wow, htat kind of sounds like my boyfriend and I. You're amazing Kelli
MC Romance chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
I sort of understand it... it's somehow vague to me. Oh, well, it's good anyway. :)
monsters dot inc chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
This is more...sad, it seems like. Shades of Kat/Lure?
Blue Devil012 chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
Again, I loved how you wrote this. This one gave me a lot of ideas and memories.*reminded her of Lure and Katlyn* Awesome work.
la-mocha chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
Another dominated female.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
i love this, the ending is gorgeous. nice work.