|Reviews for Feel|
| effervescent-sentiments chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
Very, very well done.
I liked this one a lot. No awkward phrasing, like is apparent in some of your other poetry.
The word "consternation" seemed out of place. It appeared to me like a random vocabulary word put in to fit the rhyme scheme- which it was. But, it's fine.
Nice job, keep it up!
| Forever Forbidden chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Wow. The summary drew me in and the content of the poem entranced me. It's very depictive but leaves much room for imagination and the possibility of deeper, profound thoughts.
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
wow! this is very wicked, and cool. I like it, cool peom.
| hamx chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Very, very nice.
| I still love music chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
That's nice. Almost musical.
| Mizu no Sabaku chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
lovely because I really can feel it...touching, beautiful...
| elvenstorm chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
Love these images. So many emotions running through this. Well done x
| Embellished Heart chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
Oh i like alot. Especially the part about the seasons. it up!~Dana
| Dancing Fairy chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
This is really beautiful. The language and imagery are lovely and i like the different structure: 4 lines, 2 lines. Syntax works really well too. Really good work. x
| Needa S chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
Beautiful imagery. I wish, I had a touch of your talent. Keep up the excellent work.
| Fina Arvanthol chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Very powerful in tone. Excellent work, once again. (BTW, thanks for the review!)
| Awekid chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
BTW I don't know if I reviewed before.. but... ehh.. thankies for ze review! D
**Keep on rockin' in the free world** \m/
| CeeDeeJay chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
that was rather good i liked how you wrote it and how you used words like you did. keep up the good work love you always and forever Dee
| backseats on thursdays chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
... Wow. Amazing imagery!
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Another with a kind of soothing quality that makes the words really mean something.