Reviews for Rain
plumbucket chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Poignant. Brilliant. Overall, good stuff.

Thank you for the experience,

Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Beautifully written work. It is sad. Great job! Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~
Stylo chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Oh wow.

That one's a beautiful one. Or rather, prettyful. Veery prettyful.

The last line packs a subtle punch. I love it.

I think I should try this form of poetry. I can write cinquians and sonnets and so on, but never haiku. Pah.

But really. I love this. Going on faves for...well, you know why it is. )

Bonfire Of The Sanities chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Wow... I like this, very much...well done, congratulations, u have been added to another favorites list!
Color It Black chapter 1 . 12/23/2005

Such powerful words.

Especially the last line.


PS - Evil blob!
Plinky chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
I agree. Evil blob.

Hello! I seem to remember getting an alert for this, but don't appear to have read it. Hmm.

Curiouser and curiouser...

Beautiful poem. I see it in my head when I read it. Bear with me.

I see ... like you know when it's raining, and you look up? And you can see all the droplets falling towards you? I see that. Then on the next line, the 'camera' (Oh no, I've started. I'll never stop now.) moved back and changed angle so you can see a girl standing in like gloomy darkness on a neverending plain, looking up and crying.


Love the ending.

Gorgeous poem. So emotional. I love it.

Oh, btw, I hate barney too.

*Wanders off mumbling about conspiracies involving purple dinosaurs that sing irritating songs*

Toodles! -
Fantwriter chapter 1 . 11/22/2005

wonderful wonderful

so very touching *cries*
Sparks Of Steel chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Awesome poem. I think you caputered so many emotions in such a little length of time. Good job!
HHHHHHH chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Way to stick with the tradition of nature-themed haikus and sijos while including angst! I should try this format, because that last line is subtly strong. Good job. ~Chyme~