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Pandakun84
chapter 1 .
9/13/2006
Great job on this one. I really like it! It's very good!
theoretically beautiful
chapter 1 .
8/23/2006
I liked it! Was that an intentional pun at the end? Sometimes shorter poems are better becacuse you can get to the poit instead of ranting for 700 words. Nice job!