Reviews for Another Failed Attempt
Caffeinated Cupcake chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
great dystopic feeling. nice job with the cowardice, too. you have very emotionally saturated work, you know? keep it up!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Sorry if this is too old and you don't want me to review it... but I don't have any concrit, I just really like it.
behindstonewalls chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
whoah, very powerful, i love it *adds to favorite stories list* but the line "To m life I know filled with pain" did you mean to my life I know is filled with pain? and I think the line "As I stare at the sword of dying" would be better as the sword of death, in the next line, site should be sight, its wonderful though