Reviews for If
Tori31 chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
beautifully written amber and i think i know who it is written about!
Limy chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
It's really, really, really, really, REALLY beautiful.
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
wow. that was beautiful. the first stanza kinda reminded me of my poem. it's also entitled 'if' c:
Porrum-Doctum chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
I like this... if you can like something this sad. My own situation is far from perfect at the moment... but this reminds me I'm not that bad off either.

I just learned that next to writing, reading helps too... wonderful job!

Sara
AllyCred chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
i really liked this...very well written and flowed extremely well, beautiful.

lots of loveAC
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
nice repition.. great poem
Colonel Augen chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Heart felt and very deep..nice style you have!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
aaw... thats so sweet makes me wish... the last stanza was just tearfully beautiful excellent work!
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
gorgeous. great work, i love the rhyme. something everyone can relate to. keep writing.