|Reviews for nude|
| vampiric-happenings chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
i loved it. very graphic. very good.
| Decollage chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
Frightening, beautiful-graphic and pixelated-lust.
The format coincides remarkably. Brilliant.
| Unready chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
"shows her/va/gi/na/"reminded me of ee cummings, in a way. excellent poem
| flaming.footprints chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
WOW. I. Love. This. This is brilliant and beautiful and erotic and heart popping. Many Ooh's and Ah's. Kudos.
| in tesseraction chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
in its CONCISENESS (something tells me that's not a word)
and just the right points and details are there
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
this was awesome. i have hardly any comments except that you rock&that it's on my favorites.
| Eloquent-Marionette chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Beautiful. It sort of pulls me under a bit. (in a good way)I like the last stanza "Oh, it pays, You buy, You leer,You use, You delete" Good job and KW!
| hey maria chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Sad in a bold, sharp way. Don't know if that makes sense, but there it is.
| always gats b y chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
adore the ending. nicely written. very, very nice.
xo - Rei
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
i like it, extremely well written.
lots of love~AC~
| myno chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
pretty like blood.
| beti213 chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
I like how you space this... also the flamingos... it's just one of those innane cheap images that adds to the bitter edge in this poem. I love it... a non-moralistic critique of pornography. write on.
| like a lover chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
"shows her/va/gi/na/amidst guitar strings/and lowers studded hips to the floors."
(& the rest was amazing-awesome-seductive too)
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
I'm never a good judge at this type of poetry, but in my opinion, its great. Lovely, keep it up.
| account not in use chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
wow. that was brutal, so beautiful...esp. the last stanza.