Reviews for Defeated Darling
poetrypal chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
wow. i liked this one a lot. it made me search for something deeper than what it appeared to be on the surface. good job.
Cool-Ruzz chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
This is good, isn't everyone all that wishful sometimes? Don't we wish that life was so simpful that we'll carry on living it, every single day. I bet everyone could relate to this, and thats what makes your poetry even more beautiful.
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Beautiful, just beautiful. The bolding in the last line works so well. Great piece! QueenVixta
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Humm...I don't know what I think about this poem...I want to say inspirational, but I'm not sure if it really was...I dk - undecided.
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Brilliant..you did a really good job with this Keep it Up