Reviews for Kumi's Photo
DeathlyIceMaiden chapter 14 . 1/26/2013
This shit was beyond cruel...I cried hard and found my added hatred for humanity.
nuclearXsquid chapter 14 . 3/1/2008
AW! That was the most adorable fic I have read in a long time! Yay! One bajilion thousand eight hundred and two chocolate chip cookies for you! I loved it!
Limited Edition chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
A very good start! I love the use of words and stuff XD Very well-written. Lotsa suspense too Good job.
LieLikeAlchemy chapter 14 . 8/13/2006
I love how you ended this story. I like it a lot.
Pivoine chapter 14 . 8/1/2006
oh that end! so sad, so desperate and so beautiful! I almost cry! I'm speechless...thank you.

I hope you'll write other stories, huh?
SociopathZombieIncest chapter 14 . 7/28/2006
That story was amazing. Seriously. THat was beautiful and touching and sad and cute!
Vampyre-of-darkness chapter 14 . 7/27/2006
Ah. It was so lovely. I swear I was almost in tears. You're characters were wonderful. Now for the constructive part. If I were you I'd go back and edit it again. You made quite a few mistakes and quote marks seemed to disappear. But all it needs it to be read over again. All in all it was a killer story.
WitchGhost chapter 14 . 7/25/2006
There were mistakes through the story, but it made me cry near the end and I enjoyed reading it. I thought even though there were mistakes that the story was niely written. Well done!
Oki3xDoki3 chapter 14 . 7/25/2006
Uwah! Denji! Fufufu~ I cried again...Only this time with HAPPINESS! OMG! It was soo effein god! Finally! IchigoxKumi Time! Now both ARACHI AND SAKURA CAN FALL IN A DITCH AND DIE! XD love love love! I love it and I can't wat for the Omake! :huggles:

-OKi-chan, your Seme, REMEMBER IT!
Pivoine chapter 13 . 7/11/2006
this chapter is definitely not bad! and next chapter will be the last one! I feel sad! but anyway I hope you'll update one day, huh? I'll patiently wait for it! I'm your faithful fan!
Porn Yesterday chapter 13 . 6/19/2006
Ok then... you lied! I bet you get off knowing your readers are crying for most of this story, don't you? o_O; Gah... what is up with this Arachi? Can't he just be a nice bastard for once?

... I guess not.

Besides the bastardness and wanting-to-hang-him-from-his-innards-and-chop-off-both-his-headsness... this was a good chapter.

Your writing style never seems to falter, it reprimands the reader with the need to continue and delves into one's emotion.

It's beautful - it's as if you're composing an evocative song... be it depressing or thick with surpressed emotions - it's always there.

You just have a knack of hitting me. Right. There.

Oh... but the next one is the last chapter? I'll admit - if nothing happens between Ichigo and Kumi, I'll be disappointed and saddened by it all - all his efforts and everything he's had to go through. But then again... it would also be realistic because not everyone and everything gets a happy ending.

That's life for you. Always biting someone on the ass.

Very good job though, keep doing that good thing you do and... much kudos and love.

Cheers.

Your Friendly Neighbourhood Dead Bisexual

Look, it's a dead body...!

It's a girl...

Let's poke her boobs!

Morbid, am I not?
puppy dog eyes chapter 13 . 6/7/2006
I like this story. It's so emotional and you can feel it. Not every writer can do that. Please tell me Ichigo doesn't react badly in the next chapter. Kumi has went through so much already and I think that would crush him beyond repair.
Oki3xDoki3 chapter 13 . 5/31/2006
Oh...OH MY EFFIN' GOD! THAT WAS THE SADDEST CHAPTER YET! My eyes! My eyes are like tearing up! I swear this is worth crying over! Omg denji-chan...IT WAS SO SAD! ICHIGO NEEDS TO LOVE KUMI MORE AND ARACHI... he needs to fall in a ditch and DIE!

:sob sob:

:sniff sniff:

is up...:sob:

...And I still hate Arachi!

:bwah...:

You need a happy chapter!
Lostoyannaya chapter 13 . 5/29/2006
Argh what do you mean the next chapter is the last chapter? You die now. :D

I loved the description in this one...although you just need a little tweaking on the spelling and grammar but you're gettin' better :D

~~Losty
Lumaria Faye chapter 13 . 5/26/2006
Poor Kumi-chan...I feel so bad for him. I hope he gets his Ichigo-chan after all he's put up with and Arachi...I hope he burns for what he did to Kumi-chan. Well later!
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