cries for two reasons. firstly that was such a sad and angst chapter. second cause the next chapter will be the last. you write so well and with such passion it really gets to me. I am waiting with great anticipation for the last chapter.

If Arachi was a real person I'd murder him in cold blood. Pluck every single hair off his body and hang him upside down, suspended by a robe bounding him his ankles to the ceiling...But still I can't wait to read what you have next!

I love your story. it is so angsty and I am really rooting for Kumi and Ichigo. please update. I have been waiting for a while to read a new chapter. please, I want to read more!

This story is awsome and funny I love it!

Oh my fucking God! Oh my fucking God! THAT WAS JUST TOO SAD! GOD! EKLES KATAMARI! LUFF!

uwah! :cries cries: I don't know why but that was increadibly awsomely cute! When do they romp with each other! Their so cute together Denji! I'm so proud of your works, i feel honered to be your Seme :glomps adorable denji uke: Kya more more more!

~ chu

Hmm, well... quite an angsty chapter, was it not?

A good thing though, in this instance I s'pose because it let us into Ichigo's life, we learned more about him alongside Kumi and the bittersweet tribulations that were coming both their way.

I have to say though, your writing style is well and fine... it has its beautiful portions where it seems to crescendo into beauty and back into reality - be it tragic or frail - it falls in time, subtley, with the characters themselves.

It's especially obvious in this chapter consider what's happening.

If I had to suggest one thing though, constructive criticism mind you, it'd have to be to check over your work. You seem to have more than quite a few grammatical errors.

Here's a tip, if you feel the need, get a Beta because I'm sure many people would be able to do so, as would I, but I digress.

If you were to simply fix the grammatical and punctuation errors that are apparent, it seems especially in this chapter, there'd be nothing else I would have to (constructive) crticize you on.

It seems amateur because of all the grammatical mistakes but once you get that fixed - you'll have an 'mazing piece here, trust me.

As it is though, keep it up and Mcfrikken' kudos to you 3

Cheers.

Status: Impatiently waiting.

Your Friendly Neighbourhood Dead Bisexual

Look, it's a dead body...!

It's a girl...

Let's poke her boobs!

Morbid, am I not?

very beautiful chapter and it was so sad! I almost cry! and I feel so warm inside because their embrace was so tender...and comforting...and I can't stop thinking it's just like lovers' embrace...but definitely not like friends' embrace...please continue! I worship you! I really love your story, it's so desperate but at the same time so beautiful...

b..b..bwa! My eyes hurt!more tears! :pounds pillow: t-this was so sad! :sniff sniff: And your a great writer! never forget that! I drew a picure of Ichigo to! :cries: Kumi! I love Kumi! Ichigo! Waz gonna happen to poor little him! More more more! :i've updated both my stories by the way:

Ohmeefrikingawd! It's been forever since I read this story! I couldn't remember who Arachi was or Sakura. SHAME ON MY SOUL FOR NOT REMEMBERING THE ARACHI-NESS! . Okay. Fine. Two months isn't THAT long but still. Omigawd. Achi-chan is just a confused and lonely child. I bet he has a bad life at home. Poor dear. Ohmygod I sound like my mom. *sniffs* ICHI-CHAN AND KUKUNESSISTY! YAY!YAY!YAY! FOR UPDATIONS!

Geebus.

How many times does a girl hafta' cry before Kumi gets the love of his life? I ask you.

On a side note, though: great story so far - you've really grown, your writing style that is - it's improved immensely throughout the story, as of yet.

Take that as a compliment, ne? _;

Another thing, the way you write is very heart wrenching - thus, explains the bucket of tears I have beside me, perhaps?

This chapter had quite a twist, I must say. Arachi's confession jabbed me from nowhere, wasn't expecting it. At. All. o_O

Good story so far though - really got me cheering for Kumi here - Ichigo better set himself straight and tear himself away from Sakura.

If only she were nicer - especially to Kumi - I MAY have given her the benefit of the doubt. Not in this case.

Keep it up, I eagerly await to see what happens next.

Status: Impatiently waiting.

Your Friendly Neighbourhood Dead Bisexual

Look, it's a dead body...!

It's a girl...

Let's poke her boobs!

Morbid, am I not?

Poor Kumi! -Cries and cuddles Kumi plush- I love your story! Please update!

OMG...AFTER ALL THAT IM STILL CRYING! OMG! THIS IS LIKE FREKIN TRADEGY! WHY DENJI WHY! : I STILL LOV YA THOUGH: ahha as im crying at the moment, im in progress of wrighting chappy 3 for december for ya, so enjoy when i finish! ahah and i'm glad you like (Y-A-O-I-F-I-E-D) EHEHEHEH

EE! I KNEW IT! KNEW IT! I'M SO SMART! I love this story and I love Arachi because he's such a sadistic bastard goddamn him and my love for sadists and fuck Sakura. Damn bitch stealing Ichi from KUKU like that.

Ekles! LOVE EACHOTHER ALREADY! Does Arachi like Kumi or something? It seems like it.