Reviews for Kumi's Photo
Hate In The Form Of Passion chapter 6 . 2/23/2006
Hikaru! Omigawd! He's going to be there sex slave! HAWT! And poor KuKu! And poor Ichigo for not getting the sex he deserves!
Hate In The Form Of Passion chapter 3 . 2/23/2006
Eks! POOR KUMI! GAH! I FEEL SO BAD FOR HIM! I thought when you said he had a different life or uh other side after school or somethin you meant like he was gettin' abused by his Pa. ANYWAYS! I LOVE! I LOVE! IT! IT! IT!
Pivoine chapter 10 . 2/22/2006
I've just found your story and it's great, really great. It's the first time I'm so moved by a story...I almost cry...I love your story I absolutely love please please update really soon! I'm completely hooked...
Lostoyannaya chapter 9 . 2/16/2006
Argh! I'm sorry, denji-san, but Ichigo needs be shot! How dare he not get angry at his friends for pulling such a horrible trick on Kumi! He didn't even get mad...he's really...ack, I don't like him.

In more useful terms, I love the language and the imagery you use. Your writing has really matured over these past few's like your not interested in the object so much as the meaning behind it.


PS. Great minds think alike:

denji "it still felt as if there was a Paine of glass between Kumi and the one he truly loved"

losty "Macci took a step forwards to save him but hit an indiscernible glass barrier..."

Glass must be an inherant metaphor, no?
Oki3xDoki3 chapter 9 . 2/15/2006
DENJI! You did it again! I'm crying my heart out AGAIN! I it so much! T_T I'd be crying for an hour now...It's so sad! Poor Kumi! aw Where's a kiss when you need one! ::sniff sniff:: :shakes denji: Stop leaving cliff hangers! Make em longer! Well, I'll wait until next update and I'm now in process of typing chapter 3 to December for you!
Esquirella chapter 9 . 2/15/2006
What happens next?
Lostoyannaya chapter 8 . 2/15/2006! Denji-san, I love this story! I want to know what happens next...oh, and, about "that scene" should totally do it. I got the inspiration to do mine, so you should do yours! Go denji-san!

Oki3xDoki3 chapter 8 . 1/31/2006
AWW come on! every chapter makes me cry for a freakin long time! It's so good! i love it to death! ::cries::

it was so god! I want more! ::sobs in self-stupidity::
Sleeteye chapter 8 . 1/26/2006
Beautiful chapter once again. Loved it! I absolutely love reading your book and want to have the next chapter as soon as possible... makes me want to find loads of angst books :D Cya sis, keep writting your awesome. Better than me sometimes:D
Lostoyannaya chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Wow...Denji, this story is really good! (Sorry it took so long for me to get around to!). I love your writing style - I know as Kazoua said your writing style means grammatical errors, but I like that. It makes your writing unique and special, and gives it a special touch. I was always slightly jealous of that...



PS. I've decided to host K-I as a story on here in the Sci-Fi section once my document account is enabled. Look out for it!
Laurena chapter 7 . 1/16/2006
o thats so sweet!

please update

love laurena
It's Just That chapter 7 . 1/15/2006
...Wow. Just... Wow. Your story is really sad, and sort of... Well, what I experienced for a time. I mean, sometimes, you can't really show that you love that person, and when you do, it comes out all wrong or something like that... *Sigh*

Kumi, trying to protect his love by keeping on his hardened mask of hatred and indifference... Ahh, how sad. I don't really know if Ichigo seems as innocent as you lead us readers to be, but I think he suspects something.

Well that was truly wonderful, and I wish that you'd update it, yesh?
Teya Teacup chapter 6 . 1/8/2006
hey I like the story. It seems to be going well. I must ask which Utada Hikaru song are you talking about?There are a lot of them.
Laurena chapter 6 . 1/7/2006
o this is really good! please update as I add you to my favorites list

Oki3xDoki3 chapter 6 . 1/7/2006
no! kumi! noo! why! bwa! gosh! i keep crying! bwa!it so god bwa! T_T...:: sniff :: ::sniff::...poor kumi! when's Ichigo when u need him! tehheh i'll post as soon as i get more reviews! okay? ehhehe
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