|Reviews for Building My Wings|
| marinawings chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
beautiful and inspiring. those are the first two words that come to mind after reading this. i like it very much!
| CraigAPrice chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
good poem, keep up the good writing (:
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
Very cool. Liked the rhyming. And a very good metaphor.
| Delphian-Angel chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
This was beautiful! I loved the rhyme scheme:)
| SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
interesting. good use of rhyme, and interesting concept too. i like the idea of building your wings