Reviews for These Eyes
Around.about chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
For a first time great... a bit weak the lines are cluttered and you got a bit carried away with some of the discriptions of the eyes, a little advice try to clean up some.

~Draconian Saint~
Luis Iniguez chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
Not cheesy at all, and I liked it, though I tend to lean towards free verse. You found someone? You're so freaking lucky...
Shy Cutie89 chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
wow. that was soo sweet and i think it was very well written as well, especially for it being in your first timing of writing poetry. Great job. Have fun and keep writing!