Hey, that's a pretty solid start to a story. It's a shame there isn't more. I hope you've continued writing, even if not this story, because you're a good story teller.
Keep up the great work!

I like it... because I love Aladdin and I dream of Jeannie...

It's a little slow right now, but I imagine that it will pick up, soon.

I think you're doing fine with the language... as long as there isn't any uses of modern slang, it's fine.

Great idea... kind of Beauty and the Beast meets Aladdin?

I'll be on the lookout for your next update!

Oh, such a tempting first chapter. Great introduction. Please update soon!