Reviews for Beyond Redemption
InnocentHell chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
I love this story. It was so raw and I totally imagined myself in the music like she did. And the questions in my head swirling around, was he a ghost, was he real but only to her, was she actually insane? Great story, I love how you wrote it.
PurpleReader29 chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
This is a great story. It's really interesting. I love your figurative language.
antique angels chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Told you I'd start leaving you reviews soon enough. _ (antiqueangels from LJ)

Man I wish I knew how to play the piano. It's on my list of things to do before I the clock of life stops tickin' for me. _ Hopefully I don't die before I can accomplish at least half of my dreams.

At first I thought he was a ghost...maybe he is and she's just used to being haunted! *goes back to reading* Wow, sounds like they had one unhealthy relationship. Sadly that's how a lot of relationships are. Secretly blaming each other and lacking anything that could be considered good or even decent communication.

Ha ha, I like how she gets all pissed cause he stopped playing. XD

Holy crap! The ending was so...I loved it (cause I'm sick and twisted like that)! :O And I've never heard of that myth. :S I totally need to study greek mythology again... I barely paid attention to it before though so I didn't get much the first round. x.x

Er, anyway, I liked this one-shot. _!
SandmanCircus chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
So will they be together now
Si-Sidera chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Gosh, this is a sad story. Wouldn't it be horrible to live that way? The music, the way you descrubed it made it sound so mesmerising. Good job, you did good!
snowmyth chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
wow. beautiful story. well-written too :) four thumbs up!
AJ southern chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
wow. just wow. so raw and emotional
silverbulletX chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
This story really hit me. I'm amazed at how you wrote it, at the concept behind the story, and how deep the questions vibrate in me right now!

Was Erich ever actually real at one point? And if so why was he no more than just a transparent ghost; why was he dead? And why did he 'fix' her by ending her life?

Those question just keep going through my mind over and over agian! But I guess that's the point of the story though, right? I strike deep and make people think about the -what had happened's- and the why's.

I loved the story, very heart-throbbing, compelling, and just plain amazing! Awesome job!

-silverbulletx
Love is a War chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
That was deep. It was really compelling. Excellent job.
ess3sandra chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
i thought it was really beatiful but she died, and he enver exicted. so its really sad as well. why couldnt they get eachother?
eshlie chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
all I can say is... WoW... I don't really know how to review, so please, forgive mua. :)

Luv,

d.k
Zonne chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
An amazing story. Very well written and compelling to read on. The ending was fabulous. Good job.
xander.ra chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
whoa!

that was really good!

perfect ending!
Lady Katreina chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
Well, the names and the "suicide". Oo, now that I think about it this raises questions. Was Erich real? Real imagined? Or real ghost? Was Hersh insane or just tortured or haunted?

Ah, but what and interesting turn of events. (The description of the music had me in it, immersed.)

Thank you for writing this, I certainly liked it.
Desert Illusion chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
I can see WHY this story won the first prize! It was amazing! Shocking in the end, of course when he kills her like that, but still...it was very wel written. :)

Take care, Aiur!
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