Reviews for so this is where you live
hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
I liked the way you started, with a question, and throughout the poem the dialogue didn't seem overdone at all. Like the way it flows from one 'dialogue' to another, if I may put it that way. Nice job, as usual.
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
got to love that dose of madness, & the glorious, glorious sense of dialogue.
really chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
Cynical, again. It must be the new BLACK.

Haha I liked the centipede stanza OHOHOHO.

I get what you're trying to achieve, and your punctuation is used with good effect.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/24/2005

~* noelle