|Reviews for The Smith Girls: Mischeif and Miracles|
| Jhinnua chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
The part where it jumps to the future is a little foggy. I took me up until you wrote "Whitley or Witty as she was called was the same height as Lady but that is where their similarities stopped." before I realized. Try to make the transition clearer.
Also, at the end you put "loved" instead of "love" for "I loved Whitley".
Other than that it's a really good story.