Reviews for Mr! Mr!
Moosher chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
Cute and quite amusing, but very true.. Everything is just so complicated nowadays.. besides.. I don't think there is a for n e one.. It's just the matter of finding the Mr. Closest to Mr. Right..Good job writing this.. I like how it sounds when read aloud, and I love the rhyming scheme.. Keep writing!

Narcotic-x-Poppies chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
holy shit that was fuckin good! it flowed perfectly and i really think this could be a song if you wanted it to! really great job keep writing!

Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
hehe. I love it. Nice work. love the rhyming, nice work!