i am still waiting for what's next for this story.

after how many years Im still waiting for this to be totally completed.. i love this story this much..hahaa

don't you have any plans to continue your story?

OH Shit! That won't end well, good writing thought. Loved it!

Heeeey! It's been exactly a year since you've last posted a chapter. I'm hoping you'll be posting again soon. I've been stalking the story this whole month! XD I'm so bad, but I seriously love your story. I hope this will give you inspiration to keep coming back! (:

- Keenly 3

I really like this story. I'm kinda hoping that she will end up wit MinWoo but knowing that Jade is in town (?) and that he is still reading her diary, it is going to push her into the arms of KangTa. In the end though, I think she is going to end up with MinWoo.

hello... i'm a fan of urs.. well, i'm waiting for the next chapters actually.. i'm getting excited of who Jade will be in the LIFE of MINWOO... i hope it'll be out earlier dis week... please... thanks..

OMG!

speechless..lol

i love this chapter..

i'm excited for the next chapter..

LOVE IT SO MUCH!...

~aMi19

I just Dear Diary today and you made me addicted to it. I love how you protrayed your charcaters and how you made me and other readers get excited and all. I actually know how Lee MinWoo and KangTa looks like in reality but I'll just think that they're someone else. Way different, younger from your MinWoo and KangTa.

I'm practically jealous of Moonlyte because she have both MinWoo and KangTa in love with her. (I always say this to almost every love triangle/etc. story I've read because I want this to happen me when I'm still a teenager, I'm only in 9th grade soon in January next year, I would be 10th grade. It is not too late yet. Ah, gomen ne I'm talking out of topic.)Moonlyte is so lucky and I'm thankful that you did not delete Dear Diary or else I would not have read such a beautiful story. I'm pretty sure that it have changed alot throughout the 5 years since you've started writing Dear Diary.

This may be irritating but please update as soon as possible. But do take your time to write chapter 11. Oh, I almost forget. I hate you for leaving such as a interesting cliffhanger. Just kidding. I don't hate you for that. But seriously, I can't wait for the next chapter now. I'm pretty sure that MinWoo have the same reaction as I. Jaw dropped 'to the floor'. Wide open eyes. Shocked. And screaming OMG! Ok, maybe we don't. I'm curious about MinWoo and Jade's past. Hopefully, MinWoo won't hurt Moonlyte as he did to Jade in the past. Or else I would support KangTa all the way(though I like them both.) even he seem possessive. Hopefully he won't be in the future chapters, it's kind of creepy?. Since Jade is back, wouldn't there be chaos, drama and fun? I'm so damn excited for chapter 11 right now(How many times did I say that? XD).

I know I just reviewed yesterday, but I got a chance to reread the story (once again) today. And it really refreshes my memory of what happened and the little details that I seem to always forget. I've realized that after rereading so many times, your story just keeps getting BETTER and BETTER. Keep up the awesome work! I'll always be here to support Dear Diary.

-Keenly

omg. i thought i commented on the last chapter, but i guess i didnt. sorry ! but know that i do check back for updates and rereading.

IM SO GLAD I DECIDED TO CHECK TODAY! that update was AWESOME ! icant wait until your next update. im not even kidding or over exaggerating.

moonlyte is so freaking lucky! and if you did delete your story, i think my heart woulda cried t_t cuz i really love dear diaryy.

but hanks for not deleting and upupdate soon!

Whoops I spelled Lee Min Woo wrong in the previous review! I got it all mixed up haha. Sorry!

Once again an interesting chapter! I can't wait to read more!

Ara

xoxo

Haha this line made me laugh:

"Could her situation get any worse? Why, of all people, was this happening to her? She cursed herself for ever making contact with anyone."

Once again an entertaining chapter! Still I wish it could be longer and perhaps a little more something before Min Woo Lee discovers her beauty. I don't know why I want that but I guess its entertaining reading without anyone knowing what she truly looks like and then a huge reveal somewhere along the way.

Loving this story and on to the next chapter!

Ara

xoxo

Such a well written chapter! And entertaining! This chapter definitely made me want to keep reading, you were able to describe each character so entrancingly that it was entertaining and I found myself not able to stop reading.

I did notice that you slightly slipped from past tense to present tense a few times through the chapter though. A few of the more obvious ones were:

"They are the elites known as walking legends."

Tense should be:

"They were the elites known as walking legends."

"Though they're filthy rich, they're all recognized for individual, prodigious characteristics as heirs to elite companies."

Tense should be:

"Though they were filthy rich, they were all recognized for individual prodigious characteristics as heirs to elite companies."

"He is the epitome of a rebellious-"

Tense should be:

"He was the epitome of a rebellious-"

"-he'd speak passionately about a subject he's interested in"

Tense should be:

"-he'd speak passionately about a subject he was interested in"

"There isn't a single sport that Jun Jin hadn't dominated in Kyang Min. Though his aggressiveness definitely shows while he's being active, his personality revealed the humorous side of him."

Tense should be:

"There wasn't a single sport that Jun Jin hadn't dominated in Kyang Min. Though his aggressiveness had definitely showed while he was being active, his personality revealed the humorous side of him."

"-called KangTa, is the owner of the locker that brought humility-"

Tense should be:

"-called KangTa, was the owner of the locker that brought humility-"

"It's clear to see that this nonchalant-"

Tense should be:

"It was clear to see that this nonchalant-"

"He's exactly the type of guy mothers-"

Tense should be:

"He was exactly the type of guy mothers-"

There may be other examples but they were a stray word in a sentence instead of whole sentences being in present so I left it.

I just wanted to point these out because for me when I read a story if the tense suddenly changes the illusion of the story is broken and the reader can't completely enjoy it without interrupting.

I have a problem with tenses as well though! That's why I'm so aware of it and need to point it out lol. I always love it when people can point out mistakes for me that I have missed. It also helps me learn and more aware of it when writing other chapters.

Also there were a few stray commas that didn't make sense. Try reading out each sentence aloud and when you pause put a comma. If you keep reading without pausing take the comma out.

I loved this chapter! On to the next!

Ara

xoxo

Hey!

I remember reading this ages ago and thinking I loved it! I love the concept of the plot and I really hope you do finish it!

I just wanted to point a couple of grammar errors in this chapter:

"those were her intentions"

Would sound better as: "that was her intention."

"Walking downstairs, she prepared to see the worse."

'Worse' should be "worst"

"Broken glass lied on the floor"

"Broken glass lay on the floor"

There are a few others but they make sense just not grammatical sense lol and there a few commas here and there that shouldn't be but everyone does that! I know I do :/

The prologue's short and sweet! It's a good introduction to the story!

Ara

xoxo