Reviews for Moment
Sonora the free chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
I like that a lot. It so...real.
missmeghanh chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
aren't we all?
hardcore chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
close to heart, a few words bring so much to mind. lovely.
SarahJaneDrkAngl05 chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
short yet, sweet. i like it alot. makes me think of bittersweet moments i had with my
Tr APeze-sWiNGer chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
the imagery that this brings to my mind is really spectacular. bittersweet.
Brittany Studer chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Beautiful, even though it's short is has a powerful meaning.
bread and circuses chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
it took me a moment to realise i wasn't breathing. i love it.
Edraith chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Wonderful, so simple on the surface, yet there is so much in the subtext. Great job.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Love this.
Uriah Hamilton chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Hiding from self perhaps? I feel the loneliness in this one.
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
I'm not big on haiku - but this is short, sweet, and massive in the things unsaid. So much is unknown, it just leaves you wondering. And I like that. A lot.
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Short but sweet. What I liked about this one was that anyone can relate to it. We've all had our moments at one time or another, and you've brought that out beatifully here. Keep up the amazing work.
floppybelly chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Hey, you reviewed my poem, so I'm reviewing yours.

Things leaving me wondering: Why are you hiding in the bathroom? Who did you touch?

Ah well, I don't know much about haikus, but I do like this one.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Very sweet and poignant. Nice work.
account not in use chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
it's strange, i'm a hide in the bathroom until it all goes away girl, and whenever i am hiding, the only thought in my mind is of himhimhim. never anything else. maybe it's programmed into us. great little snapshot.
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