Reviews for What Goes on in the Backyard
blythely chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
'and he's at her lap like a window and a swing'

my favourite line

the way i see it, this isn't about a dog at all..
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Are you literally speaking of a dog or a person? I think person but just hoping I'm right. It;s horrible the games we play with people's hearts. It isn't right, but we all do it conciously or not.


the Stranger in the moonlight.
Rovandin chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Nice. Do all your poems involve rough sex based relationships?
PearlinTheMist chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
your poetry is so ethereal that indeed, it's hard to follow sometimes but I do love it for poetry is meant to be read for pleasure, not to be analyzed. Never stop writing
in theory chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
I like, the subconscious is portrayed so well in the italics. Moving, in a word.
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
wow...way disturbing