Reviews for Mariah |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Gina is such a bitch! I feel really sorry for Mariah, it sucks to be in her position. I'm really glad you updated though, this story is great! QueenVixta |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this was interesting. I'm still waiting for it to get exciting though. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. All the abuse, and she still keeps going. You kinda got to give maria a bit more of a motive to this, cuz she keeps getting tortured, but if she gets sumthin good out of it, it makes a bit more sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this seems so innocent and then i guess it depends at what part of seventh grade she is |
![]() ![]() ![]() How often do random people suddenly decide to be your best friend? It does happen though so I wont complain about that new character. Mariah should like have Dave threaten Gina. That would rock. So like bye! Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, really good. it is sort of a demand to come back. now i want to know what happens between mariah and emily. does she get hurt? come on! i wanna know. write another one soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great - i hope mariah stands up to gina. good so far - keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting develepment,i think this is a very promising , i sound kind of stiff dont i?well i like the new character, works well |
![]() ![]() ![]() god, you have to stop torturing me with such cliff hangers. Write more! Soon, dammit |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good, it's going really well. Hope you update soon! QueenVixta |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far. I'm glad you're doing something for Anti Bullying Week. You don't want to know what I did but it involved a mask lol! Anyway continue soon. QueenVixta |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Everything set up for a teen substance abuse story. i mean, you have everything set up here. Fear of parents, the wish to be "Cool", social problems, unrelentness with her friend...i'm lookin forward to the next chapter. have fun... Arichos |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, interesting antipbullying week, sounds like our school's attempt at breaking down the walls i take so many things for granted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I thought you'd feinted or something." |