Gina is such a bitch! I feel really sorry for Mariah, it sucks to be in her position. I'm really glad you updated though, this story is great! QueenVixta

Oh, this was interesting. I'm still waiting for it to get exciting though. Update soon.

Wow. All the abuse, and she still keeps going. You kinda got to give maria a bit more of a motive to this, cuz she keeps getting tortured, but if she gets sumthin good out of it, it makes a bit more sense.

i like this seems so innocent and then i guess it depends at what part of seventh grade she is

How often do random people suddenly decide to be your best friend? It does happen though so I wont complain about that new character. Mariah should like have Dave threaten Gina. That would rock. So like bye! Update soon.

wow, really good. it is sort of a demand to come back. now i want to know what happens between mariah and emily. does she get hurt? come on! i wanna know. write another one soon please!

this is great - i hope mariah stands up to gina. good so far - keep it up!

interesting develepment,i think this is a very promising , i sound kind of stiff dont i?well i like the new character, works well

god, you have to stop torturing me with such cliff hangers. Write more! Soon, dammit

This is good, it's going really well. Hope you update soon! QueenVixta

Good story so far. I'm glad you're doing something for Anti Bullying Week. You don't want to know what I did but it involved a mask lol! Anyway continue soon. QueenVixta

Wow. Everything set up for a teen substance abuse story. i mean, you have everything set up here. Fear of parents, the wish to be "Cool", social problems, unrelentness with her friend...i'm lookin forward to the next chapter. have fun...

Arichos

ah, interesting

antipbullying week, sounds like our school's attempt at breaking down the walls i take so many things for granted.

"I thought you'd feinted or something."