|Reviews for On The First Day By The Water's Edge|
| dooley creel chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
the most beautiful version of the Twelve days I have ever read, which may not be saying much, but it is a beautiful poem which is also light hearted, I smiled reading it. Very clever and nicely done, is a cup of hot coffee any succor in the frozen north? The solstice is close and there is always comfort in the returning sun.
| Bita-chan chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
Its so peaceful or wistful (take your pick) and I like how you incorporated the "Twelve Days of Christmas" theme, which makes it tie into the non-italics. And your imagery was gorgeous. . I love it.
P.S. Thank you for the review.